This game is very average, It has no new mechanics or game play, it has huge amount of lag for a game with such simple graphics WHAT IS IT EVEN PROCESSING!? very basic level design, okay controls (sometimes you cannot jump and run. The music is awful and it feels like I have several tumours now.
Apart from that, it is an okay game with some nice cut scenes and some story. You need to work on game play though. It also seems that it is negatively hard.
sorry if I was too harsh, looking forward to seeing more games of yours :)