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this is really brilliant for a first, but I'd advise getting non-royalty free music and stop using comic sans.

amitkumarshaw28as responds:

thanks for the advice

bring the music down if you want your viewers to hear you without going creating a migraine and possibly chose a slower paced song.

I'm not really sure if this belongs on the site as it is intended for more animation -but i'm sure it's fine.

JetpackGamer responds:

Yeah I've learned my lesson from this first one and this is the closest thing I have that fits in "animation". I don't really like it myself XD.

Love it. Really enhances the music

BoredKid responds:

Thanks! Much appreciated man.

an animation needs to be longer than a sneeze takes. this one, was not.

LeviRand responds:

Thats like saying every webcomic has to be 10 panels to be considered a comic. Why milk something for length if the joke can be conveyed in less time? And if you sneeze for 10 seconds straight, please see a doctor, that's unhealthy.

Nice camera work and angles. Some of the sound effects sound like BWEUIIRH instead of anything

jerelas responds:

Thanks for the feedback :D

Good posing and smearing, but you really need to work at a higher fps, this kind of just looks like still images, you need at least 12 fps to create the illusion of animation :)

Artbyazpen responds:

This actually is 24 fps, but maybe I'm just waiting too many frames before adding new ones! Thank you so much, I'll try working in faster fps!

Pretty good expression and lip synching for two hours of work.
But, you should aim high and make a longer animation.

(also I've seen longer descriptions for Starbucks coffees)

Gaminator1 responds:

Thanks for the response but for the long descriptions part I was lazy and how am I suppose to write one for this.

short reel and shouldn't be in the action category

TiClaStudios responds:

Whoops! Didn't see that, my mistake. Thanks!

Really nice art style. Must of taken a long time.

I'm going to tell everyone about basic income in Canada... even though I live 5,000 miles away in England.

adamanimates responds:

Many thanks. The message doesn't have to be country-specific. Check out the Green party in the UK. They have a basic income policy all costed out and ready to go.

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ConeZone responds:

Oh my god lmao WHY DIDN'T I THINK TO ADD THAT! hahaha

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